
Here's mine from Lord of Misrule by Jaimy Gordon:
Inside the back gate of Indian Mound Downs, a hot-walking machine creaked round and round. In the judgment of Medicine Ed, walking a horse himself on the shedrow of Barn Z, the going-nowhere contraption must be the lost soul of this cheap racetrack where he been ended up at.
I like the image of the hot-walking machine as "the going-nowhere contraption."





















2 comments:
Great descriptive language...it does help me visualize the scene. Thanks for sharing!
Here's my post for FRIDAY MEMES
Good teaser!
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